Object

Representation ID: 14465

Received: 14/12/2020

Respondent: Councillor Max McLoughlin

Legally compliant? Not specified

Sound? Not specified

Duty to co-operate? Not specified

Spelling/Grammar Errors-
- Repetition at para 10 as it states- ‘capitalise on maximising’.
- Spelling error at para 18- should be brought not bought.
- Spelling error at pg.16 bullet point 3 – should be from not for.
- Para 44 (first sentence) does not make grammatical sense. Changing “will” to “aims to be” would be appropriate.
- For clarity Para 71 should refer to ‘Information Communication Technology’ not ‘ICT’.
- Policy P2 Criteria 3 iii – change ‘forecast’ to ‘forecasted’.
- Policy P2 Criteria 3 iv- change ‘mode’ to ‘modal’.
- Policy P2 Criteria 3 v- change ‘street’ to ‘streets’.
- Policy P2 Criteria 3 v- commas required ‘attractive active frontages which encourage vibrant and active street life and create’.
- Policy P2 Criteria 3 vi- change ‘creating legible’ to ‘creating a legible’.
- Policy P2 Criteria 10- remove erroneous ‘f’.
- Para 116 bullet point 2- change ‘competitive socialising’ to ‘Leisure and entertainment’.
- Policy P3 Criteria 3- missing bracket. Additional bracket to be added after the addition of "where appropriate, waste management".
- Policy P10 Criteria 14- errant full stop.